Writing Tips

Description

Describe everything general then specific. Write descriptions when introducing a new setting or character. Draw a picture/map or plot as you write.

Narration

Mood - Is the land chaotic? Peaceful? Undisturbed? Destroyed? Barely hanging-on? Trying to survive? A city rebuilt. A city built with new construction. Is the land under attack? Are there unexpected guests? Is it the chief town? Is it the poorest town? Criminal? Lawful? Independent? (Use strong verbs that specifically create a mood.) 

Terrain Description

It shows the place, time, and culture of a terrain. Describe the terrain in contrast: from the largest object to the smallest. The shape and color of a tree compared to grass and the white picket fence. Mountains to hills, with the sun rising over its peaks. Describe the terrain with action: the still pond, the blowing desert, and the breaking clouds. Observe all your senses in the surroundings. Describe the north, south, east, and west areas of a city. Describe the circumference of a city, number of houses and where are they? Which direction do they face? Add large terrain structures or dikes, then a causeway or a bridge that leads to a gate. Describe the walls, gates, and unique structures. Describe the middle of the city. Why was it built in this location? How were the buildings and roads used? How is the story taking place in this city at the present?

Description For Setting and Characters

1) Establish the general and specific location.

2) Describe the overall landscape and characterization.

3) Focus on visual details of architecture.

4) Incorporate sound, taste, touch, and smell.

5) Highlight unique features or objects.

6) Convey the mood and theme.

7) Symbolism.

Grammar

1) Tab and indent: 0.3

2) Time of day: A.M., P.M.

3) Each character has one main name.

4) Don't bunch descriptive words together.

5) Use pronouns as much as possible.

 

DEFINE

Describe the location, both broad and clear. 

Establish landscapes and bring details near. 

Focus on architecture, visuals that gleam. 

Integrate senses, sound, touch, taste, and dream. 

Note unique features, striking and rare. 

Evoke mood and themes that linger in air.